Showing posts with label Etheree Poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Etheree Poetry. Show all posts

Etheree Poetry

Synopsis

An Etheree poem consists of 10 lines; the first line has one syllable and each subsequent line increases by one in syllable count. Similarly, a reverse Etheree can be penned by starting with 10 syllables in line one, and decreasing the syllable count. A double Etheree is created by combining an Etheree and a reverse Etheree and a double reverse Etheree is creating from a reverse Etheree followed by a single Etheree.

My Tips, Tricks, & Opinions

Feel free to leave your thoughts and advice in the comment section below.

Achieve the Unique

The Etheree is all about building to a point. The use of gradually increasing (or decreasing) syllables can be used to add dramatic emphasis. I tend to gravitate to the Etheree style for two types of topics: 1. Heavy - topics that are emotionally heavy, sad or compelling, and 2. Lazy - topics that conjure the image or feeling of drowsiness (like rain), in which I want a slow, steady rhythm. However, this style is suitable for any topic.

A Few Tips

As always, syllables can be tricky. It's definitely a good idea to have access to a syllable counter for trickier words. It is also possible to incorporate a rhyme scheme (particularly interesting is the inclusion of internal rhyme), for an added layer of complexity.

Examples

Raindrops (October 29, 2014)

Rain
Falling
On the roof
Pitter patter
Like a ticking clock
Constant, steady, falling
It lulls me into deep sleep
Where nothing breaks the sweet rhythm
Where beauty sprouts from droplet pools
Nature calls me back to welcome arms
And I listen to raindrops peacefully

Squirrels Gone Wild


One
Squirrel
Sits staring
He wants my food
He waits patiently
His gaze is upon me
Expecting me to cave in
Expecting me to surrender
Big brown eyes watching me as I eat
Stealthily creeping, he's within arms reach
How close will he venture before retreat?
He seems comfortable, unafraid
Focused, mind set on stealing food--
Scurry away my little friend
Danger lies in this treat...
Find another meal
Another way
Give up,
Leave.


The Color of Joy

Warm 
Glowing
Like the fire
Dancing slowly
Bright and bold, it shines
Something strange yet beautiful:
Unmistakable--it stands out
A great vision painted in the sky
Flashes in my eyes all day and all night.


Taming the Lion

Wild
Rowdy
Emerging 
Out of control
Free spirited cat
So prone to stubbornness 
Compromising to no one
Beautiful, triumphant, fearless
Sovereign of the jungle fighting
Coexistent battles for victory.

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